and the one she actually got to see
Sequel to Dust and Insubstantial
Sequel to Dust and Insubstantial
1. cheesy teen flick by flootzavut - Likes: 11 Comments: 4 Word Count: 1,202 Hit Count: 192 Published: 07/10/24
2. comedy of errors by flootzavut - Likes: 7 Comments: 9 Word Count: 1,097 Hit Count: 87 Published: 07/19/24
3. tragedy by flootzavut - Likes: 6 Comments: 4 Word Count: 1,018 Hit Count: 136 Published: 08/18/24
Major thanks to ReallyRealBuffy for some really great and thoughtful feedback that unquestionably made this chapter better in fundamental ways; I don't know that I implemented said feedback as well as would be ideal, but insofar as I implemented it, it definitely made for a much stronger chapter.
Thanks also to DeamonQueen for looking it over much later in the game.
Any wonkiness left is, of course, all on me!
CW for lowkey suicidal ideation, it's not explicit that that's what's happening, but it's definitely there, and I don't want anyone to be ambushed by it since I didn't add the warning till just now!
4. fairytale by flootzavut - Likes: 5 Comments: 4 Word Count: 748 Hit Count: 51 Published: 09/18/24
Once again, my heartfelt thanks to ReallyRealBuffy for thoughtful, insightful feedback on this chapter.
5. (re)meet cute by flootzavut - Likes: 6 Comments: 7 Word Count: 1,415 Hit Count: 94 Published: 09/27/24
ReallyRealBuffy and medievalchic at wildly disparate times were wonderful betas on this part, too.
6. happy ever after by flootzavut - Likes: 7 Comments: 6 Word Count: 485 Hit Count: 52 Published: 09/29/24
It's been a long road, but we finally got there. Thanks again to medievalchic and ReallyRealBuffy for feedback old and new, and for everyone who's read and commented, especially those who've been patiently (and impatiently) waiting for this series to be finished since 2016!